| Comment #4 written by BamaTBob (id 3914) on 2018-01-08 14:08:21|
enjoyed this very much. Definitely would like to read much more. good characters.
| Comment #3 written by Hairyaussieguy (id 3499) on 2017-06-20 22:15:17|
Fantastic story mate! Love how you write :)
| Comment #2 written by Anonymous guest (unregistered user) on 2017-02-13 22:41:39|
I like how this is actually a good piece of fiction and not a pr0no. You’re clearly writing this from a knowledgable position, and i like that you’re actually making this realistic with characters that aren’t just 2D stereotypes. You’re clearly putting in some erotic (not-so-)subtext in here, but I’m starting to feel like there’s a danger that this will turn into a melodramatic and predictable sexfic, which seems to not be in keeping with the protagonist’s values / preferences. I feel like your story is interesting because it focuses on the deeper, and not necessarily sexual, meaning that the characters are trying to find through wrestling, and i hope it stays that way. Not every fic on here has to end with sex!
One thing i’m wondering: the protagonist has clearly been in the wrestling scene for a while, so why hasn’t he had to confront this type of homoerotic tension until now? Is it just because of the new private setting? And what is Chris trying to get out of this?
| Comment #1 written by Mrdirtybear (id 3984) on 2017-01-10 13:52:18|
This story is shaping up very well. The back story is a good one, the skill of wrestling as entertainment is well placed in the story and the personal/erotic element is natural to the story too, bring it on!